NARRITIVE WRITING

In room15 we are learning to write a good narrative. a good narrative includes a problem, a solution, a hook in sentence, a clear end and easy to under stand story line. My story is called The Day That Got Worse! I am very good at making a problem because in my story EVERYTHING gets worse!!! One thing I need to focus on is getting a solution into my story. Well that's all folks so see-ya

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CONCUSSION

On Thursdays 25th of august I was playing basketball at lunch time and tripped over the ball and got rushed to the sick bay. Mrs Mcbeth said that I had concussion. I didn't know what it was so I was puzzled. Mrs Mcbeth said that it meant you bang your head and your brain sometimes gets damaged. I had mild concussion so I really had nothing to worry about except throwing up and getting really drowsy. My dad came to pick me up and he toke me to the doctor he also rang my mum so she knew what happened. She turned up like 3 seconds before a person said "Bailey Guilford" We went into the appointment room and a doctor (I can't remember his name) gave me a check up he said I was fine but I should have a very big sleep when I get home. So when we got out of the appointment room I cuddled and good-byed my mum and got into my dads car and went home to bed. The next day I was feeling OK but I had a little head ache. I we tn to school and then a stream of people came up to me saying "we were so worried"

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SPEECHES

Pre reflection
In week 9 room15 will do speeches. I feel I will muck up and have a nervous break down I need to focus on eye contact and speaking louder than usual I feel I will muck up because people are staring at you and if you do something wrong people will laugh at you

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SEGREGATION

Segregation is a very bad thing. It separates white people from black.


At school I learnt that segregation can cause lots of harm and violence. I also learnt that Rosa Parks and Martin Luther King Jr did a boycott to hurt the bus companies for making a rule that blacks had to give their seats up for white people. When Rosa Parks did not give up her seat I was amazed because she knew she was going to go to jail. When she went further with this boycott she won a Nobel medal. When she died Martin carried on even though his house was bombed ,he was stabbed in the chest and he went to jail many times he still carried on. He won a peace prize and was the youngest person to win this. My question about segregation is how did segregation start? and why did they think that white people are better than black? Post a comment if you know.

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BAILEY