Wednesday, 31 August 2011

NARRITIVE WRITING

In room15 we are learning to write a good narrative. a good narrative includes a problem, a solution, a hook in sentence, a clear end and easy to under stand story line. My story is called The Day That Got Worse! I am very good at making a problem because in my story EVERYTHING gets worse!!! One thing I need to focus on is getting a solution into my story. Well that's all folks so see-ya

SIGNED
BAILEY

1 comment:

  1. Excellent reflection Bailey. I think you have come up with a great goal. People might get depressed if the problem doesn't have a solution. It is better to describe one problem really well and then have a detailed solution. Mr Marquand

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